This moment
that minute millisecond
the predominant aura
the skipped heartbeat
the twisted smile
the sparkle in your eyes
this naughty smirk
the stolen glance
the sweet nothings
the whispers unheard
that immense perfection
the deadly elegance
the magical euphoria
the symmetric emotion
this wild passion
the restless endure
the unflawed affinity..
As I grow slave to an hysteria;
of the idea of “you”;
you multiplying in me…
Oh…it was all….
your manifested inclination,
and your infinite efficacy…
And yes,
am saturated with you…!!
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This poem got published in Writer’s Ezine E-magazine March 2015
Issue; and won the Exceptional Poem Award.
Photo Credits: Kunal Khurana Facebook Page: www.facebook.com/kunalkhuranaphotography 500px Page: www.500px.com/KunalKhurana Flickr Page: www.flickr.com/kunal88del
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Beautiful is an understatement ! Well composed 🙂 So Mr lazy bones who inspired your poetry …?? 😉 Any way she deserves an applause for waking you from your slumber … 😀
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Oh .. thank you so much 🙂
And yes,maybe there was an inspiration 😉
& maybe that’s how i woke up, and thanks to her..!! :p 😀
Glad you liked the post.. !!
With your permission, I go again into slumber for some time..!! he he 😀
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Permission not granted 😀 How can you deprive the world of such beautiful words….?? Will be waiting for your next masterpiece ! Care to talk on the ‘inspiration’ 😛 keep writing…
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“deprive the world of such beautiful words” – Oh my, that’s was an uncalled exaggeration ..!! 😀
n then about the “inspiration”,
– On the second high tide of the seventh lunar day after the next full moon,
a wind from the south west would blow caressing the skies,
And then would reveal the “inspiration” ,
across the stars,
Amongst the stars..!!
Behold..!!
For the time is near..!! 😉 😀
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I was not exaggerating 😡 Hmm…. are you talking about your inspiration or some sort of natural calamity !! 😛
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Oh, you were not exaggerating.. Then I am humbled by your kindness..!! 😛
and yes, I was talking of the “inspiration”..!! 😀
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manifested inclination huh…poor girl..all these feelings you felt..and putting it on her 😀 😀 nicely written..I could feel the uneven heartbeats 🙂
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he he .. yes it was “a manifested inclination” 🙂 ..
and I would call her a “lucky girl” maybe 😛
Good that even you too felt the uneven heart beats, and the “off beat romance”..!!
Its fells nice to know that..!! 🙂
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You need some heavy inspiration. don’t you?! 😉
When you write something, it is really amazing. Just beautiful
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Ahaa… That was a wonderful compliment…!!!
Thank you so much..!! It really meant a lot bro..!! 🙂
And then, about the inspiration, its just that I am a more of a careless, lazy & negligent soul..!! 😀
So sometimes I get the vibe from somewhere or thin air, and that’s all.. I write.. 🙂
I am happy of the comments and the feedback I get from here..!!
And happy meeting many many wonderful people..!! I mean it.. 🙂
Yes, I am a lot inspired to write more.. Eventually..
Oh God..!! I have gone all emotional 😛 ..!!
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yes, you’ve definitely gone emotional 😛
Anyway you are welcome. Good to see you writing poetic comments too 😀 Write more then you will get more encouragements and then you will write even more.. 😉
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He he 🙂
Yes I am trying to write more 🙂 so that I would get more encouragement, and so that I would write even more n more..!! 😀
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didn’t I say the same thing?!! 😉 Anyway write more 😉
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Aye Aye ..!! Sir 😀
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😀
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This is beautifully written and the photographs are stunning! Keep up the amazing work, I’ll definitely be back to check out your stuff in the future!
Amy Lee
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Thank you Amy.. 🙂
It was a pleasure meeting you..!!
n do visit in a while 🙂
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A big thank you to the great poet 🙂
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Your photos provided the ambience to my writings..!!
Thanks for that too 🙂
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Great words…. a beautiful read… 🙂
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Thank you Maniparna..!!
Thanks for your inspiration, on my every write..!! 🙂
Stay bright..!!
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nicely written and great photographs
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Ya I like the photographs too 🙂 Too perfect ..!!
Thanks for going through, and for your kind words..!!
See you around..!! 🙂
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that’s pretty awesome! 🙂 Loved the last line ‘I’m saturated with you’ how you gave it a such a positive vibe 🙂
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Oh thank you “fellow traveller in the same boat”..!!
Yes, positive vibe was needed in the ending note, so as to create the ambience I wanted 🙂
Glad that you liked it 🙂
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Careful of your words, Poet. You’ll carry all women away on a cloud. Lovely poem. Hugs!
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Oh Audrey..!!
That was extremely sweet of you and I am grinning all now 😀
Happy to see you around 🙂
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Interesting poem…
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Thank you Jennifer..!!
That was really kind of you..!!
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very emotional verse…
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Thank you Alexandra !!
Glad that you felt the same !!
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so beautifully written and captivating. that picture is amazing too.
http://www.artbecomesyou.com
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Thank you so much !!
Yes, the picture was perfect !!
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Lovely and lively!!! Beautiful lines written for someone so beautiful. Hmm… Love is in the air. Is someone ” head over heels” in love?
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Oh 🙂 Thank you lots !!!
Love is always around us, in us ..!!! Its just that we fail to notice ..!! 🙂
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Congraats Samjoth. I am not surprised by the fact that this was chosen by the magazine 🙂 It is beautiful. So much in so few words 🙂 Keep writing
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Thank you buddy 🙂
But I dint ever expect it to be published 🙂
Lots happy for that,
and happy for the wonderful people like you,
who keeps inspiring 🙂
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The fact that you din expect it would have added to the surprise! 😀
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Yes it did 🙂
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Buon Pomeriggio 🙂
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Grazie !! 🙂
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Deep, touching and beautiful, indeed!
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HI Shruti 🙂
Thanks for being at my space..!!
Glad that you enjoyed it; and looking forward to see you more here..!! 🙂
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Sure,I will be around more often!
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🙂
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Like the poem and I love the picture you chose 🙂
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Welcome to my space, and thanks for stopping by & your kind comments.. 🙂
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No worries 🙂
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A great write… I am not a bit surprised that it got picked up 🙂 Succulent, direct and intense 🙂
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Thank you very much Prajakta 🙂
That was really a beautiful compliment and made me smile 🙂
Thanks !!
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That is absolutely beautiful!! You really have a way with words.
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You are too wonderful my freind 🙂
Do visit in a while 🙂
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This was beautiful. One turns a poet when in love, no? 🙂
Aditi
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Thank you 🙂 for your kindness !!
and welcome to my space 🙂
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Yes it is 🙂
Love transforms you..
And you flow..
Un-captured,
undestined !! 🙂
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This is so beautiful, the pic from Kunal is awesome 🙂
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Hey hi 🙂
Hope things good at your end 🙂
Thanks for your kindness & the photo provided perfect aura to the write 🙂
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Yes, buddy!
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:))
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