I was tagged by Richa to write this post, in connection with #Blogchatter.
But till this second, nothing runs in my head.
Where do I start?
Let’s start with a title. 8 minutes. Sounds interesting. And here it goes.
Eight Minutes
Now, me.
I, myself.
An inner realm, my soul.
My surrounds; the societies around me. Happenings. All clustered.
But I am blank.
I am thinking. I am receptive.
Its 9.24 pm. The weather is cold.
The coffee shimmers, as the room looked warm.
I am vague. I am emotionless.
No fancy word to pour out.
No thoughts to weave.
And I feel, I am similar.
I am alike to what I was and I am no different.
But I have changed. Maybe, I have transformed.
I have adapted. I have smiled, and have wrestled.
I have wept. I have soared.
I have lost.
I have won. I have conquered.
But I have been defeated too.
That was me.
Me in what I am. Me, in what I was.
Me.
And.
A few hundred miles away.
The sands of Arabia were around him.
It was 9.26 pm.
Him alone, like all the other days.
Unaccompanied.
Amidst the gushy winds and storms, he inhaled “safe” inside his cabin.
But this was his job; his living, and what he earned.
It was 9.28 and he knew the night could be worse.
He lit up a cigarette.
He sat with the cigarette in his hands. He knew he had only a few more cigarettes till the next supply.
The cold weather “weathered” away the cigarettes faster than what he thought would.
He would be happy on the day of the supply after every two weeks.
It meant garden-fresh fruits, vegetables & some beer.
And slowly he used to devour on the “happiness” of the supplies.
He wondered how life would have been at home.
The twinkle in the eyes of his 4 year old.
He missed it, as his eyes filled. He felt the pain in his throat spreading to his chest.
He missed his home. His Family.
It was 9.30 and the winds played on him & the never ending sands.
And him alone, like all the other days.
Its 9.32 pm.
Here, I cursed my “slow” Wi-Fi,
as the hot coffee
slipped through my tongue
& taming my insides.. !!
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I now tag Lancelot to write his take on the topic. And here I take my blog to the next level with Blogchatter
williamleeone said:
Just when we get comfortable, the discomfort of others can and should haunt us a bit . : )
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Awkward Earthling said:
hello 🙂
Long time 🙂
& yes..!!
It should haunt us a bit at least !!
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Aadhira said:
WOW!
For being back!
For Writing!
For this poetry!
For the simple comparison of life!
For hitting with a brick to get the fact, not all complaints are worth complaining!
This is just a great sweet surprise! I loved it.. 😀
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Awkward Earthling said:
No replies here !!! 🙂
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Maniparna Sengupta Majumder said:
Ah..a hot cuppa can always be an inspiration… 😀
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Awkward Earthling said:
True that…
But this one was “just written” … 🙂
Thats all 🙂
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Khushboo Dem said:
Blankness can be so expressive too!
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Awkward Earthling said:
Blankness is vast
It’s intriguing
Its enormous
Its deep..
Its what would define us
and what may destroy us too 🙂
Yes…
Blankness is expressive 🙂
Thank you for stopping by and your thoughtful comment 🙂
I was blank and this is what popped up 🙂
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beautifulaurask said:
nicely written inspite of being Blank 🙂
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Awkward Earthling said:
hi 🙂
& welcome to my page .
Thanks for stopping by & your kind comments 🙂
Yes.. Being blank is sometimes termed as peace too 🙂
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Apeksha Rai said:
Hey! How are you? After a long time I’m seeing your blog (after you commented on my blog, hope you remember!)
By the way, this is amazingly written!
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Awkward Earthling said:
Of course I remember you 🙂
I had enquired if you were on twitter then..
Thank you again for stopping by and staying in touch ..
And thanks for your kind words on the post :))
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Apeksha Rai said:
🙂
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Awkward Earthling said:
Hope you are doing great 🙂
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Apeksha Rai said:
Yup! I’ve just nominated you for the 3 day quote challenge…
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Awkward Earthling said:
Hey thanks a lot 🙂 for the invite !!
I am a lil filled up these days but yes…
I will do it soon 🙂
Hope you don’t mind ..
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Apeksha Rai said:
No probs 🙂 Thanks for accepting, I’ll be waiting for the posts…
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Awkward Earthling said:
Yes i will :))
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Shalzzz said:
Sheer excellence! Please write more, Sam. I don’t know what’s stopping you! And don’t worry, your special someone will join you in the deserts soon. 😛
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Pinakin said:
Loved it.
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Jaibala Rao said:
Sorry to sound like a broken record, but this is amazing. Its something about the way you put words together actually,that makes so much sense.
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